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Fear of Fear Itself

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« on: May 19, 2011, 07:33:04 pm »

This is start of my newest fanfic Smiley  hope you like it, its just the prologue and first chapter

Prologue

Ivy was trapped, both mentally and physically. She couldn’t get out of this terror, she wanted nothing more than the Doctor to appear and get them out. But he wasn’t there; she didn’t know where he was. She heard The Voice talk about him and keep telling her he’s dead but she knew he wasn’t. Until she saw him she wouldn’t believe what The Voice told her.
“Face it Ivy, you are all alone, give in!” The Voice said.
“I’m not scared” Ivy said.
“But I know you are, I can sense it” The Voice said.
“Please just stop, please” Ivy said desperately.
“HA HA!” The Voice laughed.
Ivy heard the laugh wrap round her head and encase her into fear again.

Chapter 1

“If you set foot on my land again I’ll shoot you dead!” the farmer said.
“Ivy keep running, he doesn’t sound like he’s joking” The Doctor said.
“What do you think I’m doing? Making tea?” Ivy said.
They were running back to the TARDIS which had landed right in the middle of a field. Usually that wouldn’t matter but this was on a farmers land and he was not happy about it. They had materialised in the 1700’s which proved that they had stepped on some fragile toes.
“No need to be sarcastic” the Doctor said “Get in!” Ivy ran straight into the TARDIS and didn’t stop until the rails stopped her. She stood panting over the railings until the Doctor dematerialised the TARDIS. “I don’t think he was very happy about our visit”
“You think? Dear me Doctor you do like to land us in trouble don’t you?” Ivy asked.
“Sometimes trouble just follows me I can’t help it” The Doctor said.
Ivy rolled her eyes and went to sit below the TARDIS control console. The Doctor continued to press random buttons and the TARDIS kept breathing slowly in and out.
Ivy was still trying to catch her breath when she sat on the floor. She looked up through the glass floor and watched the Doctor do his dance around the console. She smiled at him.
“Where you taking me now?” Ivy asked.
“Not too sure” The Doctor said not taking his eyes off the console.
“You never know. When will I see River again?”
“Again, not too sure, she just pops up”
“Ok, then can I make a request?”
The Doctor knelt on the floor and looked down at her.
“You may”
“Can we....” all of a sudden the TARDIS tossed Ivy and the Doctor off to the right. Ivy felt extremely dizzy, something she hadn’t felt before in the TARDIS. “Doctor? What was that?” Ivy asked.
“I have no idea, you ok?” the Doctor shouted.
“Dizzy”
“Did you hit your head?”
“No, Doctor the whole room is spinning” Ivy said getting worried.
“Hold on” He appeared above her again. She tried to look up at him but he wouldn’t stay in the same place.
“Doctor, can you stay still please?”
“I am still” The TARDIS shook violently again. Ivy felt incredibly sick then, she tried to shout for the Doctor but nothing came. “Ivy? Are you ok? I feel dizzy now” He looked down at Ivy. She was transparent. “Ivy!”
Ivy was lost in the sickly and dizzy feeling she hardly heard the Doctor calling her name. Ivy looked at her hand and it was disappearing, rapidly.
The Doctor couldn’t get down to her, he was too dizzy. Ivy vanished quickly and there was nothing he could do.
“Ivy!” the Doctor shouted before he disappeared himself.
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« Reply #1 on: May 21, 2011, 01:27:49 pm »

Good so far Smiley
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« Reply #2 on: May 21, 2011, 08:27:04 pm »

Thank you Smiley I do have more but I wanted feedback on it so far Smiley
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« Reply #3 on: May 21, 2011, 09:16:46 pm »

KEEP GOINGGGGG!!!!  Cheesy
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