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« on: August 14, 2011, 11:50:36 am » |
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If you spotted any mistakes within the story, jot them down in here.
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Now and then, every once in a very long while, every day in a million days, when the wind stands fair and The Doctor comes to call, everybody lives.
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« Reply #1 on: August 15, 2011, 01:56:29 pm » |
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The half human stuff is the one that bugs me most.
Also, it doesn't make sense to me that that Time Lords would build something that could then only be opened by a human. I suppose they might, but I can't see why they would
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« Reply #2 on: August 16, 2011, 10:24:00 am » |
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Eric Roberts. Biggest mistake ever!
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One! One word! Shake, milk-shake, milk! Milk! No? Not milk! Um, shake, shake, shake! Cocktail shake! What, d'you want a Harvey Wallbanger?
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« Reply #3 on: August 16, 2011, 10:48:32 am » |
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Oh and also the cloaking device/chamelion circuit gaffe!
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One! One word! Shake, milk-shake, milk! Milk! No? Not milk! Um, shake, shake, shake! Cocktail shake! What, d'you want a Harvey Wallbanger?
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« Reply #4 on: August 17, 2011, 10:08:59 am » |
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Eric Roberts. Biggest mistake ever!
Someone had to say it
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« Reply #5 on: August 18, 2011, 10:07:46 pm » |
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Besides Eric Roberts and the half-human thing, the one that stood out to me is that the Master appears to be already inside the TARDIS when Chang Lee goes in.
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« Reply #6 on: August 19, 2011, 11:34:25 am » |
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Oh and also the cloaking device/chamelion circuit gaffe!
What was that? I must have missed it
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« Reply #7 on: August 19, 2011, 05:55:18 pm » |
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Oh and also the cloaking device/chamelion circuit gaffe!
What was that? I must have missed it Doesn't he say that it recently got stuck?
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« Reply #8 on: August 20, 2011, 10:49:01 am » |
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The design of of the snake/slug thing was awful. Perhaps not a mistake, but it certainly feels like one
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« Reply #9 on: August 20, 2011, 11:11:12 am » |
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Also, they sort of implied that it would be midnight/nighttime everywhere at the same time
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« Reply #10 on: August 20, 2011, 11:24:54 am » |
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^^ That was meant for the mistakes thread!
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« Reply #11 on: August 20, 2011, 12:10:28 pm » |
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The design of of the snake/slug thing was awful. Perhaps not a mistake, but it certainly feels like one
Well Doctor Who has never been famous for its CGI. It probably would have been more shocking if the thing looked how it was supposed to
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Oh my god Karen, you can't just ask someone why they're white!
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« Reply #12 on: August 20, 2011, 03:57:06 pm » |
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^^ That was meant for the mistakes thread!
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