Peri-Peri
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« on: December 11, 2011, 10:25:42 pm » |
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If you spotted any mistakes or inconsistencies within this story then note them down in here  |
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Nyki
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« Reply #1 on: December 12, 2011, 02:19:16 pm » |
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I'm nowhere near finished yet, but so far:
A small group of Roman soldiers (not even a century) wouldn't have such a high-status standard.
The ambulance crosses straight from WW1 to the Roman zone, but they aren't next to one another on the map.
Jamie says he met the Doctor in 1745, but it was actually after the Battle of Culloden, which was in April 1746. Of course, Jamie might just have been confused about the date.
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« Reply #2 on: December 15, 2011, 12:34:33 am » |
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It's also annoying the way they keep talking about "the aliens" and "the home planet". What's wrong with having a few names?
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« Reply #3 on: December 17, 2011, 07:49:33 pm » |
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The Chief Scientist sometimes has stubble and sometimes doesn't.
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« Reply #4 on: December 20, 2011, 03:39:30 pm » |
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This might be nothing, but there is a chunk of the story where it looks like Zoe keeps trying to stop her pants from falling down by holding them up. Maybe they were too big for her or something
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« Reply #5 on: December 22, 2011, 09:50:10 pm » |
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You can see the reconditioning machine break
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« Reply #6 on: December 26, 2011, 02:14:25 pm » |
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The Chief Scientist sometimes has stubble and sometimes doesn't.
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« Reply #7 on: December 28, 2011, 02:59:48 pm » |
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This might be nothing, but there is a chunk of the story where it looks like Zoe keeps trying to stop her pants from falling down by holding them up. Maybe they were too big for her or something
I believe, though I might have this a little wrong, that the zip and buckle on her pants broke during a scene and they didn't have time for her to change, so she had to hold them up throughout the scenes they were shooting. |
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