Peri-Peri
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Circular logic will only make you dizzy, Doctor
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« on: June 03, 2012, 06:26:34 pm » |
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If you spotted any mistakes, errors, bloopers or inconsistencies in this story then note them down in here and share them with the rest of the forum  |
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Roranicus
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« Reply #1 on: June 04, 2012, 01:44:26 am » |
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When Peri falls in the first episode she bounces  |
Oh my god Karen, you can't just ask someone why they're white! |
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« Reply #2 on: June 04, 2012, 05:24:48 pm » |
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When Peri falls in the first episode she bounces That makes me laugh every time! |
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« Reply #3 on: June 04, 2012, 05:25:54 pm » |
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It may not be a mistake I guess, but the rapid way in which Peri is suddenly healed and in perfect health always seemed a bit rushed.
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« Reply #4 on: June 04, 2012, 08:06:40 pm » |
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You can see the polystyrene when he cuts through the door, so it's obviously fake
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« Reply #5 on: June 05, 2012, 11:28:44 am » |
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Why doesn't the Doctor just drink the antidote straight away before he has the chance to waste any?
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« Reply #6 on: June 05, 2012, 11:29:25 am » |
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Also, when the Doctor said Adrics name his lips didn't move.
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« Reply #7 on: June 06, 2012, 12:21:26 pm » |
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Also, when the Doctor said Adrics name his lips didn't move.
My impression was that it was all going on in his head, including that. |
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« Reply #8 on: June 06, 2012, 04:49:01 pm » |
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Maybe it's a Gallifreyan thing but when the Doctor is scanned only his hearts are visible. No lungs or kidneys or anything else.
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« Reply #9 on: June 09, 2012, 01:42:15 pm » |
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When Peri falls in the first episode she bounces I think that's my favourite part |
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