Peri-Peri
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Circular logic will only make you dizzy, Doctor
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« on: June 24, 2012, 08:46:31 pm » |
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If you spotted any errors, mistakes or bloopers within this story then come and note them down in here and share them with the rest of the forum
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It eats you, starting with your bottom
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Kovarians-Eye-Patch
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« Reply #1 on: July 01, 2012, 10:26:56 pm » |
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The bubble wrap definitely deserves a facepalm!
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Nyki
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« Reply #2 on: July 02, 2012, 05:22:29 pm » |
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If Vira was programmed to be the first to revive, why did she need someone to hand her the ressucitator? What would she have done if the Doctor and Harry hadn't been there?
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Peri-Peri
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Circular logic will only make you dizzy, Doctor
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« Reply #3 on: July 02, 2012, 09:04:19 pm » |
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The frozen humans move. One of them quite a lot
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Nyki
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« Reply #4 on: July 02, 2012, 11:15:35 pm » |
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In episode 3, the High Minister's voice says they'll have slept for longer than recorded human history, but they were expecting to sleep for five thousand years, and there's already been more recorded human history than that.
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Exterminate
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« Reply #5 on: July 03, 2012, 08:42:07 pm » |
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The Wirrn seems to fall a bit too soon at the cliffhanger of episode 1.
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Aneurin
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« Reply #6 on: July 04, 2012, 08:14:57 pm » |
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The bubble wrap definitely deserves a facepalm!
I'd second that!
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The Cyber Mistress
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« Reply #7 on: July 04, 2012, 10:57:42 pm » |
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The prop for the long shots of the space station shakes like it's on a string.
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« Reply #8 on: July 06, 2012, 09:57:03 pm » |
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The prop for the long shots of the space station shakes like it's on a string.
It probably was
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